Persuasive Writing Task

    NO MORE PLAYTIME FOR PRIMARY KIDS...

DISAGREE

I disagree about this topic because the children should have a break and a bit of play from their learning they have been doing in class, maybe sometimes they might need some fresh air so they should be able to have a break from their learning. But if they think they argue and make trouble it's good to have teachers on duty. They also need to have some food and a bit of a drink before they get back to work otherwise they will get lazy and tired or they might fall asleep during learning.

AGREE

I agree because sometimes we might need more time to learn also sometimes the children are way behind in their reading and maths. They shouldn't have playtime because if they have playtime and get back to learning all their going to be talking about is what they were doing in playtime and all the trouble that happened instead of talking about what their learning about. When playtime’s finish they will come late to class, for example “all the kids like cards and always play with them and when the bell ring their still flicking cards and then when all the kids are in class and the teacher marks the roll and calls out that child's name and she or he is not their and they will be outside playing cards and the teacher is wondering where they are. So just remember to be in "the right place in the right time with the right attitude".