Title:Empathy Writing
Introduction:Be kind, show the way, put yourself in their shoes, be with them when they are alone or sad, respect them, make sure they are feeling safe, try to change their sad sad feelings
Paragraph 1: To show Empathy you need make sure you are always fitting people in but do not leave them out alone by themselves.
Paragraph 2: So people are never sad or mad, never left out and always have to be fitted in.
Paragraph 3:Someone is on the playground and theses other friends are playing then the group of friends comes up to them and says “do you want to plays with us” and they encourage them to be happy and that is called putting yourself in their shoes.
Conclusion:Always show Empathy to people where ever you go.
You have captured some of what empathy is and what it might look like. We'll work hard this year on making sure your ideas are well put together your audience. I like your conclusion Faafetai.
ReplyDeleteMrs Nua
Nice work faafetai. I love how you put so much excitement in your writing. Keep up the great work. Your writing was an perfect sample about empathy. You are really great at exampling empathy. I love it how you said that empathy is about showing respect and other things as well. Have a great day and keep on working hard. Malo.
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